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by:  Ken Egbert (aka K. Griffiths), One More Haggard Drowned Man
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March 25, 2015

The Human Game, pt. 340: Approaching Noon

At Nadia’s door it was not as it had been; no yeshiva students ogled us, but the midday traffic along the Tarik Bab As Silsile opposed as much as any invisible Hand. We decided not to draw any conclusions. Miss Basayev, as severely attired as before, greeted our knock with a small cry of joy and a kiss for each of us.
“Someone’s been at your horses, I see,” she commented. “They’re almost as beautiful as my flowers. Well, I suppose I’m taking lunch out…”
-Off to archery practice again? –P.
“No, but let’s go to my club anyhow. We can sit and talk by the grazing paddock so we won’t have to leave your friends outside. I am very happy that you’re here.”
-If you would, Nadia… do you have any cellular phones of the one-time variety? I think that’s what they’re called. I need to make a call at noon. –P.
“Of course. I keep them for my clients, do you need one?”
-Please, if you can spare it. I’ll have to take it with me. –P.
“Don’t trouble about that. One moment. Can I get anyone anything while I’m in my office or in the kitchen?”
-No, thanks, Nadia, we’re fine/ very good to see you –D.
-Been too long. –W.
“Let’s allow that subject to go by… let me go tell the ‘staff.’”
Out she came moments after, with a small sack of pastries, a smaller backpack than usual and a phone. “It has international calling, if you need it. My German and Eastern European clients sometimes have relatives back home.”
-Much appreciated. –P.
“Oh, I’m the grateful one! So, Willie. How’s my worthy adversary?”
It would go on like that, all the way to her club. This late morning Nadia wore all black from scarf to hem; it suited her far more, to my mind, than it did Leila Al-Adil, especially given today’s topic. For whatever reason the press of merchants, cars, soldiers, et al had at us with significantly more force on the way there, this day.
-Same old, Nadia. Uh, you look well. How’s stuff? –W.
“Insanely busy, odd aches and pains, not quite enough energy to get up in the morning, lately. Even an Arabic coffee won’t always help.” While she said this she of course led us by brisk steps, talking back at us as she forded the human river. We walked, one behind another, leading our mounts as best we were able.
They continued to behave themselves.
-How goes the work? –P.
“Well enough! I’m in fashion just now. The new Premier is big on alluding to the ‘People of the Book,’ he’s giving lip service to helping settle non-Muslim families in Palestine. No idea yet if he means it, but my Jewish resettlement agencies are getting hopeful, as are my newest families.”
The market place known as the Souk Al Kattakin pretty much exploded in every direction this day, so there were lengthy moments that Nadia could not address us from up front. As things became less frantic she went on, “I have an extended group of relatives from Nurnburg occupying Maryam’s and Issa’s room right now, they’ve become my de facto office help. I may allow them to stay. I might just give them the whole second floor.” She looked back at us. “Other than that, still tearing my hair out.”
-Seems like yer doin’ all right. –W.
“I’m in a good mood today, I’m sure you figured that,” Nadia tossed back as the athletic club heaved into view on our left and the shock waves from the overloaded souk behind us further diminished. From her backpack she pulled a ID, getting ready to make herself known to the reception guards. “I’ll admit, there have been threats,” she confided to us as we at last collated ourselves at the front gateway.
-Somebody doesn’t want more Jewish families. –F.
“And somebody else does. Hamas is not in power now, so they’re doing most of the saber-rattling on the ‘no’ side. Thankfully they’re a bunch of angry old men, they talk more convincingly than they act, but our guards here are going to look at you funny anyhow. As Peter knows, I teach archery here, so…”
-We recall… --D.
The on-duty detail did give us a sour regard, but they knew Miss Basayev well enough, so they only admonished us to clean up after our mounts and waved us through. Getting comfortable on two adjoining benches, we let the horses wander off to nibble grass. Frank as ever, Nadia asked William, “You found your man? Peter told me about your assignment. How bad was it?”
-Found ‘im an’ lost ‘im. So we got another job. –W.
“Worse than the first?”
Not as bit taken aback as they might have been at my spilling so many beans, my brothers regaled her with our last few days’ misadventures. Nadia began to hand out the pastries; of course Red, Geist, Midnight and Whitey reappeared, expectant.
-Thanks… --W.
-You’d better, Nadia/ they won’t go away if you don’t/ --D.
“Fine,” she addressed our mounts, “each of you gets half of one, and there will be no more so don’t expect it.” Each took his treat and departed, after a fashion.

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March 21, 2015

The Human Game, pt. 339: Return to Al-Quds

-Now we know why they stopped. –W.
-Trying to get Leah? –F.
-Yeah. The case in Th’ Hague. Anything happens now, everybody’ll know who did it. –W.
-Well/ nice one, Jacqueline –D.
-Ah, really? They’ll think they know. –F.
-Unless the ‘badgers’ left something behind. –P.
-Where? Bailter’s office? He hasn’t found anything. That we heard of. –F.
-I don’t mean Bailter’s office. Or home. –P.
-Dr. Bernheim’s, you mean/ --D.
-Now I know why I told Al-Adil that Leah couldn’t go home… --P.
-Woulda been nice if you knew when you said it… --W.
-Dimbulb. –P.
-Was gonna give ya th’ benefit a’ the doubt, but... we still gotta make sure Al-Adil does ‘er job. –W.
-Naturally. We’ll have to do ours. –P.
-I’d like to do more... –F.
-Leah’s a big girl, Frank. Some things she’s gotta do herself. –W.
-Yeah. --F.
For the sake of all we had done, for all we had promised and had no actual way of doing ourselves, we rode that morning, after the crew returned from synagogue, for Jerusalem once again. Below us, a hundred million souls passed through our regard. We saw them and did not see them. We tried not to think about that, either.
-So. How bad was it? –P.
-Synagogue? They made us wear skullcaps. –F.
-Kipot. –P.
-Show-off. Again. –F.
-Now who’s repeating himself? –P.
-Was kinda embarrassin’, actually, since Leah hadda tell them we weren’t Jewish. We were one short th’ number needed ta do, uh, minyan, an’ some a’ the old men gave us dirty looks, but just as I was about t’ lose it Leah said, ‘Wait a minute, in an emergency situation can’t th’ Ark stand in to make it the right number?’ Th’ rabbi wasn’t too happy about it, but he said, ‘Yeah, let’s call this an emergency situation.’ So we had coffee with ‘em after prayers an’ everybody parted th’ best a’ friends. –W.
-So she likes that synagogue, does she. –P.
-I think so. She’ll probably go back tomorrow. –F.
-Al-Adil told her/ not to do that –D.
-I’ll be there, we’ll allow it to slide. Just once. I’ll remind her to go to another next time she’s in Geneva. –P.
-In other words, Petey/ it’s your turn –D.
-I know! I’d bet Rabbi Aller told her that, about the Ark. Sounds like him. –P.
-No shock –D.
-…We’ll miss her. I know I will. –P.
-Good to hear I’m not the only. –F.
-I agree, but why? When ya come right down to it, she’s a pain. –W.
-She is an agreeable pain/ --D.
-From you we get this… --W.
-I’m afraid I may no longer be able to take anyone/ all the more reason for us to be gone/ as soon as can be done –D.
All the more reason for us to take advice from the other woman we will be leaving. Something was asking us, what would she think? If Leah knew. What would be her opinion of herself, as well as of us? Something had been asking us all along. The angel said she would be needed. She would have to be of reasonably confident and sound mind. As much so as possible. Gabriel would not say why if we asked, of course, so we didn’t. On to Al Quds, then, and the Family of Mary. We wondered if Nadia would be in her office, or out visiting Palestinian government agencies, or…
You must have noted by now that this was not as it was with Ozzy or with any of our other disposable Fifths. With Dr. Bernheim, we were those to be dispensed with, and because it was we who were no longer of use. To recall William’s deathless phrase—
-‘Deathly,’ ya mean. –W.
Deathly phrase, yes. It had become apparent that we could no longer keep the gutters dirty. The human race didn’t need the help. Not here in ‘Verse II.
-So what’s Nadia gonna be able t’ tell us that we don’ already know? –W.
-I have absolutely no idea. I told her I’d come back, though. It’s only fair that I do so. –P.
-Women carry the virus, more than men do/ --D.
-Nah/ just th’ ones we know –W.
-Not exactly what I meant/ it seems that women root men to the earth/ they give them a place to return to/ if men are lucky/ odd how that actually can be irritating --D.
-Fancy way to say they bury ‘em –W.
-No wonder women often outlive men –P.
-If they were all dead, it wouldn’t matter… --F.

-Yes, it would. We have our orders. From above and below. If we want whatever pittance we are to be given, the orders from above take precedence –P.
-Try not to follow the good Doctor’s every step, Petey –D.
-So we aren’t goin’ t’ visit Leah after all this is done. –W.
-No. We take our leave tomorrow morning. We won’t see her again. –P.
-First we need a way out of the world. In a manner that will force MI6 to close the books on us. –F.
-The Agency, their subber, or the Gate shall provide. She’ll mourn us. I’d like to prevent that. –P.
-So would I. We can’t. We’re in foreign waters here, and we’re starting to drown. Either way, we’re done. –F.
-He meant this to occur. He meant it all. –P.
-I told you, the passage is narrowing/ we’ll barely be able to stand up, shortly/ if we don’t get out of it soon/ --D.
The Valley of Hinnom approached as we spied the Birket Es Sultan. We’d come to earth in the Armenian Gardens, pick a few flowers for Nadia and walk our horses the remainder of the way. Still on something of a ‘high’ from their thorough brushing session earlier, our mounts did not bother to complain. It would wear off, much as the time towards noon, Greenwich Mean, did.

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March 18, 2015

The Human Game, pt. 338: Information arrives

Playing the dutiful junior agent, Leila walked to the elevator bank at Vauxhall after removing a few more personal effects from her desk and locking it up. She hoped she would be back soon, but there was no way to predict the siege’s length. None of it appeared quite actual, even the promise of carnage that night, that morning, the coming days. It all had to be prevented. It all had to be controlled. This was known, and no more. Leila accessed the elevator and made for the lobby. Bellachiusa had taken her hands in his and said, “Come back to us, Leila. That’s an order.” There might have been a few others she’d have liked to speak to, but as the word among the Block’s denizens was that she’d been ‘temporarily reassigned to another section,’ best that she told Tom she’d do what she could and be off.
In the front of the building, Leila received a buzz on the encrypted… the long-lost Farid from IT. She decided to cut him some slack. Some.
“This is 2247,” she intoned, turning towards the building to make it more difficult for anyone to read her lips. Although Farid had at least somewhat proved himself there. The warning message on the wall art installation across the way remained as it had been for several days.
“Leila, it’s Farid. What’s this I hear, you’ve left us?”
“Smart, Farid, but not entirely true. Just temporarily reassigned. How are you?” ‘And you had your chance,’ she half-wanted to say, but maybe later.
“I wanted to let you know what we’ve found out about the bombings since Mashhad.”
“Oh, very good.”
“Not only are the bombers all male, but we’ve been going over the patterns of signal bursts in the bombed cities just before and during, and it’s very odd. There is no trigger pulse extant in any of them. These bombs are not tripped simultaneously by radio, or at least not by any method we can discover.”
“Surprisingly low-tech.” Or is it… “Got anything you can e-mail?”
“Right in one, on its way.” She heard clicking keys. At his desk, as usual.
“So you’re cluing me in because…”
“Oh, yeah. Well, I brought the info to Bellachiusa and he said to pass it on to you right off. So where are they keeping you?”
‘Why so interested?’ she wanted to say, but instead sufficed with “I’m hoping I get to tell you when I have seconds to talk. Sorry, but I’m running for a meeting. Speaking of which, though...” She waited. Leila already knew the answer, but again, why not. Abba would have rung with the news.
Trying not to swallow his tongue, Farid managed, “I haven’t had a chance, yet. I’m really sorry. I will.”
“Abba remains in very good health,” Leila informd him in a bright tone. She let him sizzle for half a moment more, then… “So there’s time. We’ll find out how much...”
“I hope to see you soon,” he offered.
“You know what you have to do,” Leila concluded, and with a “Bye” she disconnected. Calling Dr. Bernheim seemed a good idea next, but she would have to explain why. Six PM the following day would have to work. She could make certain that the scientist had been met and was on her way to Cornavin, the Geneva Euro-rail station. The usual Bentley and its driver slid to a stop out front; readying her code word, Leila made for the return to Thames House.

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March 15, 2015

The Human Game, pt. 337: The Unauthorized Lunch Item

“Nice nads? Wish my ex-wife’d agreed. I tell the Inspector, you want me to shut up, fine. I don’t call my cousin’s dog’s dogwalker who writes freelance for the POST and give him the scoop, he’s always begging me for cop scraps. Long as you tell me what’s going on with our Captain.”
“Where do you get this stuff?” asked his partner. “I am seriously impressed.”
“The Captain was always square, Juan, and yeah, he’s a Captain and thus too far above the common herd to relate to us, but you know Bedard was all right. He knew we were still visiting Ramiro’s house after and before shifts, he had to, and he turned a blind eye. So you were right, Pemmican, there’s a revelation. Anyway.” Teitelbaum sighed. “Inspector Chaudhury – yeah, that’s his name – tells me he’ll recommend me for a distinguished service medal if I don’t ask him any more questions than that. He laughs like it’s funny and says, ‘I’m kidding, that’s what else I came to tell you.’”
“I think you already had one coming.”
“You’re the best, Juan.” The patient indicated, and his listeners leaned closer. In a lower voice: “The Captain got a package from this big guy who walked into the house dressed like some Grenadier Guard or something. He rode away with three other guys, all on horses.”
“…That so.” Pemmican kept silent, for once.
“In that package was a very detailed drawing of a man screwing a woman who looked almost exactly like the photo of Bedard’s mother on his desk. It also looks like she’s caught on fire, but it’s only her who is. Not the guy. And the guy looks a little like the one who dropped off the drawings! This is according to Chaudhury. You remember. We hadn’t left yet, I think. Somebody brought it to Bedard, the package, and as soon as he opens it everybody heard him starting to scream. They don’t know if he’ll come back.”
“Circumstances and circumstances.”
“You think so, Pem?”
“It sucks, I agree. They knew he told us.”
“And ‘they’ would be who, now?”
“What, is this philosophy class? Do I have to define my terms?”
An attractive young woman in standard blue arrived at the door, greeting the Sergeant and his visitors. They turned. All right, this must be Nursie Babe. “Good afternoon, officers. Sergeant Teitelbaum, can I get you anything?”
“Not me, ma’am, thanks very much.” Nursie Babe then turned to the fellow in the first bed, still dead to the world.
“Look, guys…” Teitelbaum thought half a moment, and… “I have told you what I know. I am going to ask you not to say anything to anybody else. I am going to suggest we all just get on with our lives and go back to enforcing the general ignorance.”
“…OK. Fine.”
“Mr. Eichelwitz?” asked Nursie Babe, somewhere behind them.
“Can do, Gerry.“
“For the Captain’s sake, all right? I appreciate it.”
“That’s all right. So, are you retiring or what?”
“Mr. Eichelwitz, aren’t you hungry?” the nurse continued. “You’ve barely touched your lunch.”
“Yeah, and I’m sorry. They’re getting me a part time gig with the Brooklyn DA’s office. They really want me to shut up, I think. But we know what’s up. That idiot James as much as told us when we arrested him. He said he dropped the paperweight. It fell through the skylight and brained Ramiro. That’s all she wrote.”
“But where did James really come from? Up in the sky?”
“Oh, dear…” they heard Nursie Babe say behind them.
“’Swhere we found him. You answer one question, you think up 5 more. I’ve gone as far as I can go, guys. I’ll miss you. Yeah, Pemmican, even you.”
“You can’t take away our poker nights,” the sergeant said. “I’ll sue.”
“Uh, pardon me, Sergeant?” asked the nurse. “Officers? I’m very sorry, but I need you all to sit right where you are and not move.” A buzzing tone sounded at the nurse’s station up the hall.
“Jeez, no…” began the patient (the live one), but it was too late, half a dozen people were piling into the front of the room wearing differing vivid colors and
so forth. A crash cart followed them, but Nursie wisely slashed the curtain shut at about this point. Gerry looked at his visitors. “Staying for dinner?”
“Looks like it. So we still got our poker night?”
“Hey, you don’t show up Tuesday at six with a pocket full of change, I’ll call Chaudhury and tell him you guessed everything.”
“Good,” Gonzalez responded, quieter.
“We will not do like cops always do. We will keep hanging out.”
“Good. Then I guess we’ll have to.” Pemmican also nodded agreement.
Teitelbaum moved the tray farther away on the wheeled table. “Now we just have to get the Dragan to throw in.”
“Shouldn’t be too difficult,” shrugged Pemmican. “She’s even more divorced than you are. Oh, wait.”
Teitelbaum relaxed. At least his old compatriots weren’t going to walk out on him. Not before he won too much at the next game. “Hm?”
“Been meaning to mention. Awful lot of guys on horses in Brooklyn, lately…”
“What?” His eye lighted on the piece of paper under his meal tray. Picking it up and taking a quick look, the detective handed it around. “I’m not putting in my papers. Forget everything I just said. Got me?”
For once, Pemmican had nothing ‘smart’ to add. Gonzalez was not so reticent. “They gave your roomie your meal…”
“Yeah. Screw them. I’m retiring when there’s no crime any more. Maybe we'll never find out what the hell happened to Bedard and maybe we'll never find the mystery man of 332 86th Street but I am not retiring. Do I render myself pellucid?”

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March 12, 2015

The Human Game, pt. 336: Putting in his Papers?

“You learn about Brooklyn,” Sgt. Pemmican offered as the squad car thrummed off Schenectady Avenue, “how flat it is. I transferred here from Manhattan… oh, after 10 years in. Stopped getting winded! Wasn’t in any better shape, though. Didn’t figure it out until your partner said to me, ‘Once you get out of midtown, dingdong, Manhattan has some hills. Especially above 110th Street.’ Who knew?”
Detective Sergeant Gonzalez readied his flowers in their open-ended paper bag. “My partner. Sure.”
“Maybe we can talk him out of it.” Pemmican found a spot on the main floor of the parking garage and nosed into it.
“He is the most stubborn cuss I ever worked with, Pemmy.” Juan opened his door. “Never changed his mind that I recall. Where we’d eat, maybe. No, he has a major bug.”
“Up his, yeah. Okay, we have a challenge.” Locking up the cruiser, the two, equally uniformed, made for the visitor’s desk.

Teitelbaum was out of his bed and sitting in the chair next to it; a new uneaten meal sat on its moveable tray stand next to him. He looked thinner. Upon their entry, both officers noticed him viewing said tray as if it were just something else he was trying to convince himself to do. They only half saw the roommate, sacked out, occupying the slot closest to the hall door; Pemmy and ‘Gonzo’ nodded to him before they noticed he was asleep, and then made their way to the man of the hour. Pemmican, naturally, said the wrong thing right off.
“You have the ugliest feet I have ever seen.”
Tired, Gerard looked towards them. “Why don’t we see if they’ll both fit up your ass.” He did his best to grin, given how Pemmican remained a necessary evil. For how much longer, of course… “Hey, Juan, how’s the station?” Pemmican laughed, then adjusted his volume. The fellow on the far side of the half-drawn curtain did not respond.
Gonzalez shook his partner’s hand, indicating the bouquet. “Not the same. Are you allergic?”
“They’d love an excuse to remedicate.” Teitelbaum pointed to the water carafe. “Thanks, buddy, they should fit fine in that.”
Pemmy sat on the bed, undaunted that he had stuck his own foot ‘in it’ already. “Sorry. You know me. Why do they keep pushing off the ceremony?”
The detective sergeant sighed, stuck his arm out. “Notice anything?”
“I detect a tremor.”
“You should see it without the drugs.” Gonzalez returned from the bathroom
with the flower in the carafe, placed it on the night table. He sat also, a few feet further down the bed.
“Still shaking?”
“Like when I used to drink, only worse.” He took in the view of his fellow officers, thinking what it would be like coming back to ‘the six-five’, after the last day. Whether he’d be able to. Whether he’d want to. Yes, he did. But he hadn’t actually… not yet. “Nobody at 1PP wants a detective sergeant quietly vibrating in front of the cameras and the news pooper scoopers. Nobody also wants one tranquilized to the back molars. I’ll get my decoration when I get it. Juan, I have never seen that uniform.”
“I’m surprised it still fits.”
“Well. What’ve you heard? That Pemmican didn’t make up.” The patient swung his head again to view his occasional nemesis.
“On my best behavior,” the sergeant protested.
“No, Gerry, it was too weird to add to. I’m glad they let us in. We’ve been here twice since the day.” He lifted his hands. “You got clearance to start the interview, after 20 minutes a bunch of whackadoos on horses show up and stick guns in your mouth, they take off with the perp while throwing tear gas at you, and you manage to get off a couple of shots with a downed agent’s piece. Then they find the top of the perp’s skull in the parking lot on the roof of a car, and the guys with the horses are gone with the rest of him.”
“Yeah, what was ATF even doing with the guy?”
“Slow down, Pemmy, let him talk…”
“Surprisingly unadorned and almost as it occurred,” replied the patient. He flipped a hand toward the lunch tray. “Anybody want my jello? They get miffed if you don’t clean your plate.” Pemmican took the cue. “Enjoy. All right. That’s the basic story.” He appeared to address neither of the men. “It’s how they got away that put me down for the count.”
Pemmican slurped jello, missed his usual cue.
“Pemmican?” asked Gonzalez. “Isn’t this where you usually say something that only you think is funny?”
“I’m listening for once,” the slurper managed.
“Sorry, I wasn’t sure. There was something like a square in the air above the car next to the one where the piece of skull landed. The four guys all had earpieces on. They were all taking orders from someone remote. All four of them went through the wall in the room after one of them smashed a huge hole in it, they made for the parking lot and they all jumped into this square in the air. They had to run around it and go in the back of it. It looked like a swatch of fog or a piece of plate glass that needed a wash really bad. You could see through it but not at all well. Out in the parking lot there were about five agents, I heard them yelling, but once the guys on horses vanished I started coughing like hell, and I just didn’t see any more. Next time my eyes cleared it was gone. The square, I mean.”
Finished with the jello, Sgt. Pemmican asked, “Not bad, Titleist, thanks. Why did the Fedz have our perp, again?”
“I asked. It was his skin color. They thought he was a foreigner. You remember. At first when he approached us from on high when we were on Ramiro’s back roof garden, he looked like he’d been marinating in strong tea. The U.S. Attorney thought he was a foreigner, handed him to Alcohol, Tobacco and Firearms.”
“He had a British accent, of course he was a foreigner,” pointed out Gonzalez.
“Ah, the hell with this.”
“I didn’t say anything more—“
“Just this once it’s not you, Pemmy.” Teitelbaum pulled the table towards him, took the sandwich off the plate and attempted an exploratory bite. Once he swallowed… “All right. Better than they get on Riker’s.”
“We hope.”
“No, it’s what you heard, Juan. But nobody wants me to say anything about the circumstances.”
“Why not.”
“It’ll get in the papers and everybody will go bonkers. Just like Captain Bedard said. Heard anything more?”
“Still on med leave,” replied Gonzalez. “Nobody knows anything. I did find his house number but all it does is ring.”
“All this crap in the news lately saying one intelligence agency is at odds with another…” The patient took another bite, chewed, then: “Maybe I could get used to this. But, an Inspector came in here three days ago from the land of the brass asses, and when was the last time you ever even saw one? He starts in on me like the Borough Commander did with the Captain after his mom got killed. Remember?”
“He was telling us to go for it, Titleist. He just couldn’t say that out loud.”
“Flash forward,” cautioned Gonzalez. “What about the Inspector?”
“Tells me that there’s some conjecture the FBI ran those guys through the ATF facility and since I blew the perp away he’s probably been planted on Potter’s Field. Inspector… Chow Chow? I don’t remember.”
“So now nobody gets to find out where the guy came from.”
“Par for the course, Juan! He also got to see me shaking; ‘Nursie Babe’ had topped me up a few minutes before he walked in. Guess it wasn’t working yet.”
“Uh, but what else’d he tell you, Ger?”
“Oh, sure. I am to seriously consider retiring. He says. I have my 29 years in, why not? He says. The fact that there is still crime out there does not faze him. Like that whiz-bang who walked into that bank on Fifth and Bay Ridge the other day and blew himself and it into the street. Who’s doin’ that? Not my prob any longer, says the Inspector. The additional fact that I like my job must mean I’m too crazy to keep doing it. What is this, Catch-22? I tell him all I need is 2 weeks in the sun somewhere, he says he doesn’t think that will do it. I am also not to divulge any indication I may have received that one Federal agency may be poaching on a sister agency. A united front must be preserved at all costs, Detective Sergeant, he says.”
“Somebody’s got heavy tech too. A square in the air…”
“Screams of Feds, right?” asked Pemmican, removing his hat at last as if he remembered at last he was indoors. “Don’t they got all that stuff?”
“Hits a high C.” Teitelbaum finished his sandwich. “So I gave it a go for the team. I asked the Inspector where our Captain went.”
“Nice nads on you, Gerry.”

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"A good writer is an expert on nothing but himself. And on that subject, if he is wise, he holds his tongue." --John le Carre

Exactly how interesting can the author be, anyway, when nobody has any idea where their creativity comes from or how the mechanics of inspiration works? Maybe it's something we all have access to. Maybe it's a sluice that empties into your head when you're facing in a particular direction and thinking a particular series of things. Then again, maybe not.
However benevolent inspiration really is, to say nothing of what it is, I suspect that any good fictional character is a lot more interesting than the person who dreams it up. So mine speak for me here.

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